Thursday, November 18, 2010

Smiles

It's Writer's Workshop time again! I chose to write about a time someone made me smile. Pardon my poetry skills, please :)



an early spring night,
grilling seemed right.

as i headed out to make more than a snack
my husband, from work, just got back.

not finding me home,
he went back out to roam.

me done cooking our dinner
as he returned a winner.

in his hands were two flowers
one for me and one for the daughter, unborn, that was ours.

5 comments:

Maggie S said...

So sweet, what a precious memory... Stopping by from Mama Kat's!!!

commonplacelife said...

I love this poem!!! So reverent to the memory. Stopping by from Mama Kat's

Diane said...

What a sweet guy you have there! :)

Valerie said...

Your wonderful little poem says it all-what a sweetheart of a husband you have!

Stopping by from Mama Kat's

Kim said...

This was very touching and good for you for writing it. I looked at that choice and thought - I don't write poems very well.

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